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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hey,

Couldn't resist coming back again!

Again you have written another lovely chapter. It isn't full of action but that doesn't matter... It's given us the chance to get to know the family more and has moved the story on.

So when Victoire got sick, my immediate thought was she was pregnant. You did a good job of making us believe the just sick story though so now I'm not so sure... Hmm I guess I'll have to read on to find out!!

Oh again your Teddy is the sweetest thing ever. His and Vic's exchanges are so heart warming to read, it just makes me so happy! I loved he got protective over an imaginary friend and the comment about her only being Vic's daughter when she's naughty made me laugh too!

There are a few typos I noticed, so you wrote "Emmline" near the top instead of "Emmaline" for example but most of those could be sorted with a quick read through, nothing to worry about!

Like I said though, a great chapter and I look forward to reading more!

Lauren :)

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Author's Response: So I'm totally happy that you haven't gotten bored with it or anything! :D That makes me super excited! :D

To be quite honest with you, I wasn't planning on telling anyone what was/is wrong with her, but as I think more on the story, the more unsure even I am. :/ I feel like I may have made an accidental extra plot that I wanted to write at the time, but I'm not sure if I'm willing to write it out xD. Strange response, I know, but I'll figure it out soon, and then when I do, you will definitely read about it ;).

Haha, Teddy is probably my dad really. My dad makes the same jokes and says the same things. I love my dad (HUGE daddy's girl), and Teddy just reminds me of the gentle man that my dad is. :)

Thanks! I'll fix those soon! :)

Yay! Thank you so much for continuing on with the story and continuing to review! You're the best! :D

~Mae


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