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Review:1917farmgirl says:
Okay, the first time I read this, I was intrigued by Draco's boss. I mean he's rude, drinking on the job, not paying close enough attention to the murder cases that are crossing his desk... And I still think all those things, but this time around, I'm wondering something. When Draco said he got Ana to talk, and the boss didn't jump with excitement like Draco thought but instead seemed more concerned with what she knew and what she saw...is he in on it somehow? Is there more to this boss than meets the eye? Or am I totally bonkers and barking up the wrong tree? (It's possible. I've done that before.)

And now Draco has landed himself even more work to do. Ah, but in the end, he probably won't mind, hehehe. (Now if you'd just LISTEN to me and do what I keep trying to get you to do for the ending.)

I love Ana's connection to the stars, and the natural way she just conjures them on her ceiling. It's so normal, you almost miss the fact that she just did this without a wand. I also really liked the description you put in there of her new surroundings.

And then Draco and Ana start bickering again, LOL. That last paragraph of the middle section? Sure, Ana. Just keep telling yourself that...right... LOL.

And then there's Astoria. You know how I feel about her. I don't think I'll repeat it again.

On to the next chapter! (Though it might be tomorrow before I get to it. I'm getting sleepy.)

- Farmgirl

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Author's Response: There IS more that meets the eye! Good on you for noticing :)

IT IS WHAT IS BEST FOR THE STORY FARMGIRL, I already told you I was going to write you your own ending, no need to fuss.

Thank you for reviewing :)

--Monica


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