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Review:1917farmgirl says:
So, I have been the most awful of friends, never stopping by to read this again and review for real this time. But, I got sucked into the Blackout Battle for the third round, and what better way to fulfill my 20 reviews than on the story of a friend?

I've told you before and I will tell you again: this chapter just makes me go WOW!! Seriously. It's so intense and heart-pounding, right from the start. Your descriptions are powerful and leave your readers gasping right along with Ana.

You know I've read this before, but it still gets me every time when Ana hears her sister cry! And then her parents, and she has to leave them! Part of me wants to yell at her mother for choosing to go back, for choosing her husband over her child, but the other part of me understands.

And now Ana is so alone. To stand there, watching your home burn to the ground, knowing your family was gone and you were all alone...I can't imagine it.

Such an amazing start to what I know is a brilliant story. I can't wait to see how you've changed it since I last read it, because I thought it was really good the first time around!

Oh, and kudos for inventing a character that not only grabs you right from the first word, but is unique and original.

- Farmgirl
(Blackout Battle Round 3 Review 1/20)

Author's Response: You have NOT been the most awful of friends! You've been the BEST of friends EVER :)

I'm so glad that you liked this :) I worked hard to edit it and make it flow better.

You know Ana won't be alone for long ;) And she thanks you gracefully for saying how original she is.

--Monica


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