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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :)

Aw, this was such an adorable start to your story! It feels very refreshing and original as well, and Annabelle and Lily are so adorable in their innocence. I really like Annie so far, she seems down to earth but also quite quirky and fun, and I'm curious to find out more about her family and what happened to her mother.

The suspense of who Lily's boyfriend is was quite exciting! I really had no idea who it was going to be, but then when his name was announced I had to giggle. I'm curious to see how the twins might be in this story. The feeling of youth they have is great, like how Luna only lets her sons go on a date if they're together. I wonder if perhaps Annie will like Lorcan better than she suspects...

The dynamic between Lily and Annie is great. I like how they're quite playful and teasing, especially when Annie was teasing Lily about dating a boy who is so close to the family. I also liked the detail about Lockhart and how he's still thought of as a beautiful and vain man all these years later. :P

This was a lovely start to your story, and I enjoyed it! :)

Blackout Round 3 - 20/20

Author's Response: Hi!

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you're interested in Annie! She's a pretty mysterious character and doesn't like to talk about herself much so hopefully she'll open up enough for everyone to know more about her! ;)

Haha you'll meet them soon enough! Annie is pretty nervous so I guess we'll have to see if she can get over that enough to have fun!

Yeah, Annie and Lily remind me a lot of me and my best friend :) I think teasing and being able to joke around together is definitely a big part of a friendship. Also, forgiveness and doing things for each other which is why Annie thinks she is such a push over... Maybe she's just a good friend? :P

anyways, thank you again for reading and reviewing! Your review definitely made me smile :)

-Amanda


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