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Review:Maelody says:
Oh my goodness! Can I give a big big hug to Abigail here?! The poor dear! The very least I can be happy for here is that it didn't go down in the actual Great Hall (unless I missed that?) so no one really saw outside that circle.

Who the heck were those two meaning to get if they didn't want Abigail? Michelle? I hope it's not one of those dreadfully sad beginnings where we find out that James actually likes Michelle, not realizing how amazing Abigail is. Then again, that'd make it all the more interesting, yeah? ;)

I don't think I hate the boys (though I LOVE William), I think they should definitely be ashamed. I think the two of them and Will alone gives us a good idea of who James is though. A prankster, but he definitely is open to his more mature side. :) I love that!

I think Michelle likes Lucian ;). How cute would that be? Even if I don't like her that much right now xD.

I just love your stories! Your writing is so effortless to read, and I'm always so surprised to find I've come to the end because I'm just so entrapped in the story! Bravo! :D

Moving onward!

~Mae

Author's Response: Yes! you can give the biggest hug to Abigail, she needs it. It happened outside of the Great Hall, so not many people would have seen it.

They wanted Michelle, so they are actually a little guilty at getting Abigail instead. Oh no, James is not going to be falling for Michele, don't you worry. I couldn't do that to poor Abigail. :P As interesting as that would be :P

William is awesome! The better of James' friends, Barry and Elijah are too much of pranksters, well, more so than James and William.

Oo maybe she does like Lucian? That could happen :D :P Stay tuned.

Thank you so so much! Your reviews never fail to give me the biggest grins and the happiest feelings in the world. :D


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