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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :)

This is a really original and interesting start to your story! :) I'm certainly intrigued. I like how you chose to tell it through Draco's story, and how his family has changed since the war. He seems quite peaceful these days, but still intimidated by power and not willing to go to the Ministry and tell them about the new Dark Lord. You did a good job of showing his sense of self-preservation, but also his love for his family which I thought was great. But then again, at the same time he wasn't afraid to offer Scorpius up as a spy. So perhaps Draco is quite like Lucius after all.

It was sad how Lucius and Narcissa had deteriorated like this, but I thought it was really effective and well-written.

Alpha seems very intimidating. I wonder who exactly the new Dark Lord is - his son? Something to do with Albus, from the title? Very fitting that they would have the connections to Voldemort, both through blood and through links like the graveyard. Alpha's appearance also reminded me of Voldy, as did his way of intimidating the Death Eaters instantly.

There was such an interesting contrast between Draco's happy relationship with Scorpius and the fear and danger which surely awaits him. I really liked this, it was a great and exciting beginning to your story! :D

Blackout Round 3 - 14/20

Author's Response: Hello!

I think Draco is a bit wary around the Ministry, even now...besides, he saw first-hand what old Voldy would do. I think he's just afraid that Alpha will be the same - which is understandable.

Things aren't to good for the Malfoy grandparents these days. They kinda deserve it though...kinda...

Well, the new lord is definitely something to do with Albus, but you'll have to wait till later to find out who it is. Alpha is a very big copy-cat. He thinks that because Voldy is his second cousin (or something like that) he can just take his look and style because he's next-in-line.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

-Karou


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