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Review:Maelody says:
Ok, so maybe this is a little early to tell, but I can't help but think I don't like Michelle. She reminds me of a girl I used to call my best friend for three years before I learned to speak up for myself. It was awful being around her, though when she'd do occasional nice things, it made it harder to get that courage. I'll keep in mind that I don't like Michelle until she really makes an effort to not be mean ;).

I mean seriously, who just automatically comes up with "He only talked to you because he heard you liked him and he wanted to stop that?" Instead of "maybe he heard you like him and likes you too so he wanted to talk to you!" Eck, her priorities already have me upset! xD Poor Abigail! She can dump Michelle and be my best friend! We can read comics and giggle over James together! :D

I love that you tell us where Hufflepuff Common Room is here because I feel like it's one of those forgotten houses. And James waving at her all adorably like that made me smile! He wasn't even ashamed to say hi to her! How do you like that, Michelle? :p

Anyway, your characters are as lovely as they are in ILHEFTBOU and is it a sin to hope to see Horatio at some point in this? Woah! Aren't they in the same House as Louis and Horatio? :3 I can't wait to see the connection! :D

Great job, as always, my dear! :D I'll move on now! :)

~Mae

Author's Response: It's fine, you can hate Michelle. :O That's the exact same thing with me! That's what Michelle is based on. I had a best friend who tried to control my life until I stood up for myself.

Her main reason is jealousy, she thinks she can talk to Abigail like that. Awww Abigail would love to have you as a best friend! You'll be so much better and a lot more encouraging.

I had to include the common room, it's such a fun common room and I never see it in stories either. Haha James is quite adorable at times around Abigail. Haha in your face Michelle!

Thank you so so much :D You will see Horatio and Louis in this! Don't you worry, they are in the same house. :D

Thank you so so much for your amazing review! :D


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