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Review:PolyJuice_ says:
BLACKOUT BATTLE~ (Just an extra one for insurance!)

I've not read the one-shot, but after I'm back from work I think I'll give it a go as I loved this story so far! (This works fine as a standalone, though. I understood all. :) )

Aw, I loved that Neville's kids are called Frank and Alice! That's so sweet!

I really enjoyed reading about all your characters - they're all well rounded and thought out, rather than flat like a lot of characters are.

Uhoh. The summary for this story tells us it's cancer, but all the same I'm on the edge of my seat for poor Alice! Even though it's about her back, I'm glad it's not soley cancer focused, and there's more to each of their lives than that. IT gives it a more realistic feel. I can't wait to see where you're going with this and have added it to my currently reading so i can check up on it!

Author's Response: Hey! Nice to see you again! :D

That's great to hear! I was a bit nervous as there were quite a lot more characters than in the one-shot, so it's nice to hear that you understood it well without reading the one-shot :)

Yeah, I can't really imagine them calling them anything else :) the other kids do have meanings to their names though, so you'll have to wait and see where those came from! ;)

That's so sweet of you for putting this on your currently reading list :) I've hit a bit of a block with it, but I think once I'm done writing Spread Your Wings and am out of school (12 days left, whoo!) I'll start up with this again :) Yes, I didn't want the cancer to be all her life was about, so I wanted to make sure to introduce as many characters as possible before she actually found out what is was that was causing her pain. She has a lot of people who love her in her life and they are all so important parts of the story!

I hope to see you back again once I'm able to update more! thank you for reading and reviewing :)

-Amanda


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