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Review:PolyJuice_ says:
BLACKOUT BATTLE~ 20/20! (YES! LAST ONE! *wipes sweat off brow)

Aw! This was so cute! After spending most of the battle reviewing sad stories this was a refreshing change! Especially as this was as well written as it is! I loved the way you wrote these two girls. It almost made me feel like one of them, chattering away about their new boyfriends.

I can't wait until the next chapter. This is going to be a great story, and it'll be hilarious to see this date of Lily's, not to mention the blind date set up for Annie!

Homeschooled, eh? Interesting, I never thought about the boys being homeschooled, but when you say it, I guess it makes sense. Very Luna-like. makes me wonder what kind of education they're getting! Haha!

Anyway, great job!


Author's Response: Hey!

Thank you, I'm glad you like it so far! This is a pretty fluffy story, eh? I had been trying to write a darker story and realized I needed to write something a bit happier to get out of a small rut I was in and this is what came out of it! :)

Yep! I know Luna was very smart and liked her education, but I can't imagine her wanting to be learning all these new things in different countries without her boys :p I think it also makes them unique, too, as Luna no doubt would want them to be.

anyways, I'm glad you liked it! I hope you come back for more and I'm able to hear how you like the other chapters, as well :)


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