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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :)

I really enjoyed getting to know Sadie a little better and seeing how much her past affects her. It's always there, lingering and touching everything she does, and I liked how she keeps comparing her old life to her new one and wondering at what it means to be in the Weasley family.

I liked how the story began, and you really captured that feeling of waking up before the sun, and the excitement of going out somewhere. I thought it was beautifully written and also liked the little details, such as how Ginny and Hermione sleep. Another great moment was when the twins were being so nice to Sadie and she decided she needed to learn to tell them apart. I love how you write the twins, they feel so in sync and in canon, but also have that kindness and understanding not to talk to Sadie if she feels like being alone.

I liked how you tied in the canon events, but still fit Sadie into the story so flawlessly. Not explicitly writing the scenes we know from canon and instead finding ways to allude to them was very skillful here. I especially liked the reference to Malfoy and his comment about money - and how that bothered Sadie - as it was a great little nod to canon while still integrating the AU aspects into the story.

Bill was wonderful here, he makes such a warm and caring big brother. I liked how he was the one to notice Sadie was upset, and how he told her to think of him as a big brother and even in his head compared her to Ginny. He seems so down to earth and responsible, but with that understanding of dark magic. I really liked the references to his curse breaking as well.

This was such a flawless chapter, I loved it! :) I'm a little worried about how Sadie might react to the events which are about to happen at the World Cup, but I'm sure you'll write it flawlessly. Great job! :D

Blackout Round 3 - 10/20

Author's Response: Two in one day! It's a miracle! Hehehehe.

Thanks so much for another flawless review! You are truly making my head swell from your praise.

I really was trying to capture that before dawn feeling and so it makes me grin to know you felt that as you were reading it. And that you love the twins is just icing on top of this great review cake you've given me! I'm always happy when someone loves the twins in my stories. :)

I do have to admit that parts of this chapter were really hard to write, and it's probably just going to get harder as I go on through this story. Finding a way to include Sadie in canon events without just retelling the books. Very difficult! Glad its working so far. Though the jury is still out on whether I can keep it up for 4 books.

Bill is far underused in stories in my opinion, so it was nice to have a chance to use him here. Hopefully I can do it more as the story progresses.

Thanks again! I love your reviews so much!


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