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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! This is DarkRose from the forums here to review for you for the Valentine's Day Competition! :D Sorry it took so long...anyhow, let's go over things:

Plot: This was a nice story! I liked that I could see how it tied in with your partner's story, as well. Good job! As I told Rumple, I loved that you both chose to write about the moment when the Founders met up to form Hogwarts. Interesting choice!

Characterization: Good job writing for each of the distinct characters. I thought it was interesting that Rowena was so close to her servants. That was unexpected. The ending seemed a little odd on this story, though. I thought Salazar actually WOULD look at her condescendingly since he actually DOES look down on her. Hmmm.

Descriptions: I loved the details you provided about how Rowena and her home looked! Great job! It was so nice to be able to get into the story and experience it.

Style: As with Rumple's story, you did a great job with the style of a Founders' story. You captured the language and mannerisms wonderfully and I really enjoyed reading this.

Overall, great job! Good luck in the competition.

--Emily

Author's Response: Hello! I'm sorry that it's taken... Over TWO months for me to respond to this lovely review!

Thank you so much! When we were talking it over, we thought it would be cool to write slightly differing perspectives of the first meeting of the Founders. It's kind of awesome because she's a Slytherin and I'm a Ravenclaw. :)

Rowena definitely acts different from how one would expect a medieval lady to act. Perhaps I wrote a bit anachronistically... Whoops, sorry not sorry. :) I see Rowena as forward-thinking, and if she hears logic coming from the mouth of someone below her station, she's going to listen to them. Again, perhaps a little TOO anachronistic, but that's just the way it turned out. :D Also, the "look" at the end... Yeah, that was a little quick. It's hard for me to do romance, especially in a one-shot! D:

Thank you so, so much for your review. I'm so glad you liked my story! :)

~UnluckyStar57


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