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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle 5/6

This was a short yet touching piece and I liked reading it. I am a DraMione shipper too and I think this "moment" was beautifully portrayed. It was sweet how Hermione was trying to convince Draco that everything would be okay and he wasn't useless and that there was a way out.

On the other hand, I felt for Draco as he thought he had no choice. The ending bit was particularly sad as how Draco pressed a kiss on her frozen form's forehead and how tears fell from her eyes.

The dialogue was also nicely written and the overall narrative touched my heart. There were typos that I spotted, one of them being "fallen on death ears" instead of "deaf ears".

But apart from that, this was very sweet and sad and I loved it. The tragedy of Draco/Hermione and poor broken Draco were so well portrayed. Good job =)

--AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey Aditi!

Aw thank you! *hugs* I haven't written a Dramione before this one, so it was a new experience for me.

Poor Draco didn't have any other way out.

Ah, thank you for pointing that out, I'm going to go back and edit this story and try to sort out those typos. :P

Thank you so much Aditi! You're awesome! :D


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