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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hey again...

I couldn't resist coming back!!

Another great chapter! I have to say again that your writing is really effortless to read. I immediately get drawn in and don't look up until the chapter is finished.

I thought the idea of Victoire applying for the job in France was really cute and the fact she got it lovely. Her relationship with Van is really good to read and the fact they've got this position together is really lucky for the two of them. I'm sure if Vic does go they'll have a great time together.

The worry that Vic feels to how teddy will take the news was again well placed. Even though he was absolutely fine with it, who wouldn't panic and think the worst. I think you wrote that so well.

Now, oh my gosh! My heart was practically melting when Vic got to Hogwarts. Her and teddy together are the cutest thing ever. I've always been a massive fan of them and the way you write them together may just be the best I've seen. It was perfect.

So yeah, excellent job... I look forward to reading more!!

Lauren :)

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Author's Response: Yay! You've returned and decided to stay! :D

Aww! Thank you so much! Trust me, it's not so effortless in writing ;). I'm glad you love it so much though! I miss writing it, so there should be a chapter up soon! (Cross your fingers!)

I wanted to write something outside of my comfort zone. England I've been writing about for years, but never once France. It'll give me hopefully a fresh look to other places, so I hope it works out well for both Vic and me ;). I'm glad you like the idea though! I'm just as excited as you are! :D Ahhh! I LOVE Van! haha :D

Thanks! I originally had it that Teddy would like it but have to stay behind for school, but then I remembered it was practically summer. He HAD to go! :D haha. At least for the summer anyway. Though I want to show just how loving and gentle I think he really is, and I'm so happy that you love it! :)

:3 You make me blush! I'm so ecstatic here right now! You flatter me way too much ;). I'm honestly so pleased and excited that you've taken on to the relationship and situation and everything so well! :) I love the story and it's great to see it get the attention from the people who truly love this sort of thing! :)

Thank you so so much for being so amazing and coming back and reviewing and telling me just how much you love the story! I'm doing a little happy dance you're so awesome! :D

~Mae


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