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Review:anythingcouldhappen says:
HI! Reviewing this for Blackout Bingo!

Ooh honey! That's come up before... *grins* How interesting that James smelled honey in when he smelled the amorentia. What a coincidence! Oh and the parchment too? Interesting, interesting!

I"m glad to see that James is paying more attention to Abigail, even if right now it's only about guilt. Also, he's already a better friend to her than Michelle. Don't even get me started on Michelle in this chapter. I have now figuratively punched her. She just can't be happy for Abigail can she?! Ok, she's jealous, but being nasty to Abigail is not going to help that. At least Abigail recognizes that their friendship is not at all healthy. Recognition of the problem is the first step to change right?

There were a couple of times when I think you changed from past tense to present tense. It was a little confusing to read, but nothing major. Again, this chapter felt a little short. But if that's what you're aiming for, go with it!

Awesome chapter :)

Sam

Author's Response: Yes! Yes it has come up before! I'm so glad that you spotted that. :D Yes yes yes! :D Ah I'm so happy that you spotted those. :D

It may be 60% guilt and 40% liking her... although that amount will go up soon.

Oh Michelle, she brings out so many emotions in people. :D Haha yes! I'm glad that you figuratively punched her, she deserved it. :D
No she can't just be happy for Abigail, mainly because the attention isn't on her.

Ah no! I shall go back and edit it, so thank you for pointing that out. :D

Thanks once again Sam! :D


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