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Review:anythingcouldhappen says:
Hi! I'm here yet again, reviewing this for Blackout Bingo!

James' apology was so adorable and awkward and just generally funny. I'm not sure I trust him or the chocolate, but I still loved this chapter. I am a bit curious as to why James apologized rather than Barry and Elijah, since it was actually their fault. Suspicious...James is an interesting character, and I want to see more of him.

As for Abigail, her reaction and feelings were great. I actually felt like I was reading about myself in this chapter. While I'm not like Abigail in a lot of ways, this chapter showed a part of her that was very like me. The thing that stuck out to me most was the turning over the chocolate in her hands. I do that when I'm uncomfortable or not sure what to think!

Michelle.she needs to have some redeeming qualities or I am going to figuratively punch her. She's such a jerk to Abigail!

Great chapter!


Author's Response: Well hello again! :D

Haha I'm not sure if I would trust his chocolate either, especially if I knew that he was hanging around with Elijah and Barry. The reason he apologised instead of them is that they ... honestly don't care, that's the basic gist of it. They're not nice people. There shall be more James! don't you worry! :P

Aw I'm so happy that you could connect with Abigail, I wanted to have her as realistic as possible so it's great to hear that she had quirks like other people. :D

She does have some. eventually... It's just she doesn't always show them.

Thank you so much! :D

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