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Review:anythingcouldhappen says:
Hi! Reviewing this for Blackout Bingo :)

*raises hand* I hate Barry and Elijah! Seriously, that was such a nasty thing to do. I can't even imagine the kind of embarrassment that that sort of thing would bring. Poor Abigail! And to have it happen pretty publicly! With Ron, at least it all happened pretty early without anyone seeing. And of course it creates a whole awkward situation for James and Abigail now. I'll be very interested to see how they deal with it!

I am also still very irritated with Michelle. She is not a good friend, and its frustrating that she's Abigail's only friend. She deserves better than a friend she lies to and is embarrassed to tell things to because she know Michelle will tease her! I really enjoy all your characters--in that they're realistic enough for me to love and hate some of them already.

One thing--what do Barry and Elijah look like? What about William? Professor Noble? I think they could use a little more description. Otherwise, I thought this chapter was really well done!


Author's Response: *raises hand as well* ELijah and Barry need their heads knocked together, they're pretty mean and don't seem too bothered about what they've done. I feel really sorry for Abigail, and James when he finally comes off of the love potion.

She really isn't a good friend, she needs to be a better one definitely. Hopefully Abigail branches out soon, she doesn't deserve to be treated like that.

Thank you so much :D Ahhh I forgot to add descriptions! I have gone back and edited some in. :P

Thank you once again! :D

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