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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hey there!!

So I really love Teddy and Victoire so I knew I would love this and I really did!

So first things, I loved the comment about barely having time to shave her legs... Didn't sound familiar at all... The things we go through eh? Haha I also love their little girls name!! Emmaline is beautiful.

I really enjoyed reading the part in St Mungos, the whole thing felt very natural and you really went to town with some of the details. It's clear you've given a lot of thought to the tasks that they have to do. It made me smile that they were thinking if the patients as addicts and hypochondriacs - it made the whole thing feel more realistic because people always do that when they're in a job.

Louis was hilarious, I have to say. Bless him, worried about his personal life, I'm not surprised Victoire was laughing as well as cringing a little. It was nice to see their relationship though, they're obviously close.

Hmm the letter got my interest, you left it on a bit of a cliff hanger! Who is it from!!

This was a great first chapter! It felt so natural and I was really smiling at a lot of it. You did a great job, I look forward to reading more!!

Lauren :)

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Author's Response: Hey there! Thank you so much for choosing this story to stop and read/review! :D It makes me so happy! :D

I love the pair, too! :) I never thought I'd actually write about them really, not in such a main sort of way, but I find myself loving it more than I ever thought I would! :)

Emmaline! :3 Such an adorable name! I like using baby names that I'd consider for my own kids someday haha xD. Also, I believe every woman can relate on the leg shaving ;).

Whoo! I wrote a realistic hospital scene! You have no idea how happy that makes me! :D Thank you so much! For years I've wanted to write a Scrubs-esque type fanfiction, but I've been so scared of the hospital type atmosphere, but I'm trying it a little bit with this one. It won't always be in the hospital, but I'm hoping that it'll fill that void of plot bunnies I had for years haha. :) Thank you sooo much for saying that though!

I love Louis! It's a little like my relationship with my brother, in a less intimate way in our personal lives. ;) We talk about gross things, personal things, and weird things all the time! haha :)

Yay! Interest! I'm succeeding! ;)

Yay! I'm glad you loved it! I hope you enjoy what is left of it if you decide to stay! :D

Thank you SO much for the read and review!


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