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Review:anythingcouldhappen says:
Hi! Reviewing this for Blackout Bingo :)

I loved the way you expanded on Abigail's character in this chapter! She's clearly got a lot of room to grow, and she's flawed--which is always good and realistic! Her friendhship with Michelle is interesting. I'm not going to lie--I hope she at some point she confronts Michelle about the way she treats her. Michelle is a bit of a jerk. I hope she's got some good qualities to her--because right now she seems really selfish.

I'm of course hoping to see more of James in the next chapter! I love me some Potter kids ^_^

The chapter felt a little short, but I think it works. Mainly because you lay out some more of Abigail's character. All the writing and everything was great! My favorite part was probably when Abigail was talking about food...I love that she has being close to the Great Hall as a pro of being a Hufflepuff! It was pretty amusing to read, especially because I agree with her :)

Great job! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Sam

Author's Response: Hey! :D

Thank you, I really enjoy writing Abigail, she's a fun character to explore. Very different to the other female characters I've written about. Oh at some point Abigail is going to snap and tell Michelle exactly how she feels, but when that'll happen...

Of course there shall be more James soon. :P

Haha that would totally be one of my favourite things if I was in Hufflepuff. :P So I had to make it hers as well. :D

Thank you so much Sam! :D


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