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Review:anythingcouldhappen says:
Hi! I'm reviewing this for Blackout Bingo :)

I really liked this! You wrote all the characters very well I think. They all talked and reacted as I would expect them to. My favorite part was when Neville cast at Snape. Although he was scared, he was able to overcome that and attack the man he feared the most. It really shows the kind of development he went through to get to the point he was at when the trio meets him at the end of DH!

Overall, this was very well written and all your descriptions were great! I especially loved when you described Ginny with her blazing hair and eyes! I wanted to point out two slight errors: "dizz. His mind was filled with endless scenarios where all of this could end so bad." I think you mean to have "dizzy" and "badly" :) A quick edit would fix that!

Awesome job!

Sam

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