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Review:anythingcouldhappen says:
Hi! I'm reviewing this for Blackout Bingo :)

I really like the comic book theme! There are so many next gen stories on the archives, and I think having a theme like this sets yours apart! And comic books are so much fun. I love that Abigail has a slight obsession with them--I haven't read many stories with a main character like that before! Abigail seems like she's going to be a very interesting and unique main character.

I'm very curious as to how she and James are going to be interacting...and how their friendship/relationship/whatever it may be develops. From the fleeting glimpse I got of James in this chapter, I like him! He seems funny, and also like pretty nice guy.

Your writing is all very nice and clean and flows very well. Nice job!

One thing I just have to thank you for--she changed into her robes!!! Thank you! There are so many stories that have students just walking around in their ordinary clothes and it always bothers me! It's so off canon, and it doesn't even make sense. So anyway, thanks for that!


Author's Response: Hey! :D

Thank you so much! I wanted to try and have this as different to other next gen stories as I could, so that's where comic books came in. Oh yes, Abigail has an obsession with them.

Ah their relationship develops a lot over the next few chapters so you will see a lot more of James soon. :D

Thank you so much! *squishes in a hug*

Hahaha I'm so glad that you liked that part, it always bothers me too! Why wouldn't they get changed? They're going to school haha. :D

Thank you once again! :D

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