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Review:nott theodore says:

Michelle is really starting to get on my nerves. She reminds me of some people I've known at different times in my life, and is it bad if I say I kind of want to throw something at her? If only you could throw things through a computer screen...

Aw, I hoped that James would come and apologise, and so I'm really glad that he did in this chapter - even though it wasn't his fault, it just seemed like the sort of thing that he'd do. Really his friends should be coming and apologising to Abigail but he's even apologised for them - he seems really cute.

His apology was adorable, too. I loved the way that he was so awkward and embarrassed about the whole thing and that even though he'd probably planned an apology in his head, he ended up saying some very strange things, like the fact that he had the potential to become a very good stalker. Not necessarily what a girl wants to hear when you're apologising to her :P But he reminded me a bit of Harry and the way that he got so flustered and embarrassed around girls he liked, which was really nice to see because James II is so often portrayed as cocky and a bit of a charmer. I have a feeling he was also struggling with his apology because he actually likes her, though!

I couldn't help laughing at the bit about James making up a love poem for her when he was under the influence of the potion! There are still some really funny bits in these chapters, and I love Abigail's thoughts, too. Her decision process is similar to what I think mine would be when someone gave me chocolate (which I don't want to believe contains a love potion, at least not to James's knowledge!).

These have been great chapters so far and I'll be back soon to carry on the story!

Sian :)

Blackout Bingo staff reviews 6/6

Author's Response: Hey!

Michelle really is a big meanie, she's not a nice person at all. But I wanted to have her not being nice as like you said there are many people in our lives that aren't nice. Haha we should all throw things at the computer screen!

Yes, he came and apologised even though he didn't have to and he was being all rambly. His friends are jerks and should have apologised.

Oh yes, he was very awkward with his apology. I blame Abigail, she brings out the goofy adorable side of him. He must have feelings for her. :P Yes, he planned the apology but it really didn't come out the way it should have done. Haha yes! Like father like son!

I so wished that I had put that into the scene, maybe one day William can mention it? Embarass James in front of Abigail? :P Awww thank you so much for your amazingly awesome reviews! They really make my day! :D

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