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Review:nott theodore says:
Hello again!

Waking up early after six weeks of going to bed late was not an easy task, let me tell you that. This is genuinely how I feel after every single holiday. It's so unfair that you have to get up at a normal time for things like school and work!

There were so many funny lines in this chapter that I couldn't help smiling all the way through. I think that ties in well with the comic book theme and the style of writing does as well. Have you written a lot of humour before? I really enjoyed it here, even though a lot of it seemed quite subtle.

The way that Abigail was talking about all the food and being near the kitchens actually made me want to be in Hufflepuff for a moment. She makes some very good arguments as to why Hufflepuff is the best house.

And there's a character called SIAN! This has genuinely never happened before in any story I've read here, so I'm just going to give you a massive hug for that now, because you picked a great name! *hugs* (I promise I'm not as strange as this makes me sound. I just think it's exciting :P)

Ugh, I'm starting to like Michelle a lot less in this chapter. She seems really annoying and it's not just that she bosses Abigail around and tells her what to do, but it feels like she's keeping her around to make her feel better about herself. Something tells me that she wouldn't take kindly to a relationship between Abigail and James, because it would mean Abigail would seem more popular than her or something. I felt really sorry for her with this, but she seems like a very realistic character and that makes her relatable too.

Aw, James waved at her, and he was looking at her during the meal! That's cute, I'm excited to see if there's more interaction between them soon!

Sian :)

Blackout Bingo staff reviews 4/6

Author's Response: Heya! :D

Haha that's how I feel after everything actually. :P I know! Work and school should start about 1pm and only last until 2pm. :D

Awww thank you, I'm glad that it made you smile. I really enjoy writing comedy, the only comedy I really write is from the 'sidekick' in my stories. Like Horatio in my Louis story and Albus in my other James story. So it's fun to make other people be the comedy value in the stories.

I am envious of Hufflepuff because of that reason! They are so close to the Great Hall and kitchens, how they don't spend all day in there is beyond me!

Haha yes! There is a Sian! Aw *accepts hug* That's alright, I never see my name in stories ever! There's never a Tammi anywhere.

It's alright to dislike Michelle, even hate her. She isn't a very nice person and I agree that she does keep Abigail around to make herself feel better, she likes that it's just her and Abigail and hates other people getting involved in their lifes. She's very jealous and demanding and controlling.

Oh Michelle doesn't like James and Abigail talking.

Yep, James is being all cute. :D There will be more soon!

Thank you so much Sian! Your review is as awesomely cool as your name! :D

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