Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:nott theodore says:
Hi! I'm here reviewing staffer stories for the Blackout Bingo but I was really glad to get a chance to read this - I haven't had much time to read FF recently but this caught my eye when I saw the description in the Loony Lounge a few months ago.

This was really great! I love the premise of this - I don't think that I've ever read a story about someone who reads comic books before, and the only time I've seen them appear in fanfiction is when there's a weird, lonely boy who spends all his time reading them. To see a girl, and the main character no less, reading comic books here was a really refreshing change. I also now really want to read a magical comic book, because the way that you described them here they sound amazing! I'd never thought before that magical comics would move like their photos do, but that would make them even cooler to read!

Also, your CI for this chapter fit perfectly :D

I really liked the normality here in the characters that I got to see, and that you didn't introduce a massive cast in the first chapter. There are a lot of stories that introduce me to so many characters I never keep track of who they are, but the few we saw here made me feel like I have a handle on the characters. Daryl seems quite sweet as a big brother and Michelle just seems like a normal friend - teenage girls do argue a lot, so it makes sense to see a friendship here that isn't completely perfect.

Aw, look at James knocking someone over :P He was so cute and embarrassed over it as well, it seemed really sweet. I know this is a James/OC story so I'm looking forward to seeing their relationship develop - clearly they share a sense of humour!

Sian :)

Blackout Bingo staff reviews 3/6

Author's Response: Hey!!! I must say that I did love this challenge. :P I got a lot of reviews that day.

I'm so glad that you remember it from the Loony Lounge.

I don't think I've ever read a story like that either? That's why I wanted to write it, you don't see many girls in stories liking anything like this. Or have many wizards liking something like this apart from weird lonely boys like you've said. Haha I want to read one as well! I'm so jealous that they get moving ones and we don't.

Thank you very much! I had so much fun making that chapter image and the others after it. :D

I wanted to try and keep the first chapter simple, have you meeting Abigail and have James involved in a scene and how they 'crash' together. The friendship between Michelle and Abigail is based off of my relationship with my old best friend, she would try and control my life and in the end I had enough.

Haha yep, at least he apologised and was embarassed instead of just leaving her on the floor to recover. Oh yeah, they have a lot of interests that are the same, so I'm excited to show more of that as the chapters develop.

Thank you so much! I love your reviews so much! :D


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 263
Submit Report: