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Review:Ginny says:
This story was absolutely awesome and I'm so glad there is a sequel. I loved the battle at Grimmauld Place. You are great at writing action scenes like that. What I really like too is how not everything is serious in your story. There are always those little comical parts in between that lighten the mood of the story. For example, Fred and George making fun of Hermione and the Death Eater jumping out of the window when he saw Dumbledore in this chapter.
This is a good point to end the first story, although I thought it came a bit abruptly. I'm already excited to start on the sequel. Thank you for writing this!

Author's Response: The story has gotten a bit darker, due to Voldemort returning and the war, but I think it is important that there is a break in tension from time to time.
You're absolutely right about the story ending a bit abruptly, but I didn't want it to be too long. The sequel is already finished. I hope you will like it just as much. Thank you for reviewing every chapter. That really means a lot!

Teddy


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