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Review:TidalDragon says:
Well! Teddy's return was certainly an interesting wrinkle and Dominique seems like a perfectly pesky little sister. I liked the bit where she found the shows boring at first, but then recommended them to the boy she met. It seems very age-appropriate and fitting.

I also continue to be blown away by the level of detail you provide about the locations and the history! You must be an incredible student of European cities, very well-traveled, or both!

I really like your writing style, pace, and balance of dialogue, inner monologue, and description. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Haha, yes, I've enjoyed seeing people's reactions when Teddy appears! I quite like writing Dominique, she's so playful and a good contrast to Victoire. She also brings out a more mature, yet slightly irritable side to Victoire which I like exploring. Dominique is quite young as well and I wanted to show that.

Thank you! :) Most of the places I've written about so far in this story are places I visited last year, so I've been using that as inspiration. Prague was one of the cities I really knew I had to write about - it's amazing!

Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews! :)


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