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Review:balinaginaaa says:
Hi, I think your story was good, can I be a big critical moan for a second :P I felt you rushed into things between Draco and Hermione a bit quick, now I know it was supposed to move fast, but maybe a bit more being put into the build up of them Yeno? That's my personal opinion tho, some others are possibly fine with it! I'm a huge dramoine fan myself and I'm hoping to complete a fanfic one day too, and I do find myself just wanting to jump straight into them being together!
I got the feel for the hurt and what Ron done the 2nd-3rd time it was mentioned but once or twice in every chapter got very annoying, in my opinion you done a great job at explaining it and setting the emotions the first time.
I enjoyed this story regardless and I never really leave reviews but I feel you could write an amazing story with a few tweeks here and there, well done! :) thank you for a lovely read.

Author's Response: Hello there! I am glad you liked the story and I do realize completely my mistakes in this fanfic. :) Thank you for continueing to read it anyway! :D

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