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Review:LilyLou says:
Hi, here for the Ravenclaw Review Battle!

This was so interesting! You have a great deal of suspense in the words, leaving me wondering what this whole society is, and what Arnold is all about! Ooh, so intriguing.

Your detailed descriptions of everything was so wonderful, it left me with pictures in my mind. You mention her mother and father, and Annemarie (I LOVE THAT NAME), which is wonderful because you leave questions and suspense, urging your readers on, and leaving them wondering who Annemarie is, why her and Persephone's parents are relevant to the situation.

Great job! Update soon, this really is a great story.


Author's Response: Hello! Thanks for your review!

This was my first fanfic ever, so it makes me really happy that people still read it sometimes. I definitely need to update it, but right now I don't have anything planned for it. :/

Yes, mystery mystery mystery! The two chapters that I've written of this are veiled in mystery--so much so that even I don't know what's going to happen next! (This is also a bad thing because it means that I can't write it if I don't know what's going to happen...)

I'm so glad you liked my descriptions!! Annemarie is a pretty name--and actually one that I didn't have any trouble coming up with, so it's good to hear that you love it! (I have such trouble with naming things...) Yes, many questions!! I still think about them from time to time, because Persephone's parents are definitely a big part of the plot, but it's really difficult to figure out how to fit everything in.

Thanks again for the lovely review!


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