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Review:Courtney Dark says:

Oooh, what a creative, original idea for a story. I have certainly never read anything else like this, and I'm excited to see where it goes!

There was something so beautifully...simple about this first chapter. The descriptions were all lovely, and just so real - and the little details you added in about the garlic and onions and courgettes being chopped...I'm not sure why that stuck out to me, but I've always seen Frank and Alice as being these people with this marvelous cross between homeliness and Auror-ness, if that makes any sense. And this chapter captured this!

Okay, now I'm beginning to ramble on about nothing.

I wonder what Neville's reaction was when he found out about his parents recovery? I'm looking forward to him being introduced into the story, because he's always been a favourite of mine!


Author's Response: Hi Courtney! Ah yay, that's wonderful to hear that this fic is original! It's quite experimental for me so I'm really glad it seems creative and original.

I'm so glad you liked the descriptions, too. That's exactly what I was going for, really simple and idyllic in that first part and it means a lot to me to hear that it feels real. Haha, I've always seen Frank and Alice that way too - the type that would have a great home cooked meal in their homely cottage, then go off to battle Death Eaters lol. I'm so glad that came across!

Neville is one of my favourite characters too! I'm glad you're looking forward to that :)

Thanks for an awesome review!

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