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Review:Lady of Tears says:
I've never read a collaboration story before, so this is a new experience. I'm excited to see how two different writers create one story!

I really enjoyed reading this and thought you did a fantastic job at grabbing my attention. By the end of the chapter I wanted to know what was going to happen next. I thought you had strong characters and good dialogue. I think getting inside of Fred's mind at the beginning was my favorite part. So heartbreaking!

A few things that stood out to me:

It doesn't matter much since all it becomes clear in the next few paragraphs, but I thought we were talking about Fred Weasley I for awhile. Which made me confused because Molly wouldn't have so many vases! But it's not a big deal at all. But it doesn't lend to something I wanted to see more of: character description. Fred is bi-racial, correct? There is so much room to imagine what he looks like, what he got from George and what he got from Angelina. I wanted more description of what Fred and Rox looked like.

But overall, this was fantastic. I really enjoyed reading it. Can't wait to see more!

-Lady of Tears

Author's Response: Hi there!

Well, same here for us! Its completely new and so so exciting, so I hope you (and the other readers) like it just as much as us!

Thank you! I'm glad! I love writing dialogue and I'm so so relieved that it turned out fine! The bit with Rox was super hard to write, so I'm very pleased that you liked it!

Hahaha, well, I'm glad it was eventually made clear! And you're right! the description could be added in here! But, this was meant to be a beginning "set the scene" type of chapter, so you can expect more of that in the next one!

Thank you so so much! We must do more swaps! :D

-Ree and Mae


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