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Review:marauderfan says:
Hi Jenna! Ah, I'm sorry it's taken me ages to get here and read this marvellous chapter. But anyway. Yay! I love the background on Richard in this one, from his perspective, and all the information about the kingdoms and his brother - I just love the attention to history and the wonderful spin you put on it. Your style of writing, with your vivid descriptions and wonderful characters, really makes history come to life.

So she lost the potion. That's definitely going to cause some problems later. I have a feeling she'll be around in the past for a while this time...

I loved the discussion between Rose and Richard in the field. Rose is able to get away with quite a lot, in terms of her colloquial speaking, being very forward and free! It might cause problems ifshe decides to stay at the castle, no matter how hard she tries not to embarrass him. But I think she's in for a rude awakening when she finds out what life is like for most women in that century (especially given her history with Scorpius, and what Richard said - or rather didn't say - about gender roles in the 1400s). I don't think Rose will like it. I certainly wouldn't!

Ooh, and I'm really curious to know the story with Scorpius. Something tells me it's much more than she let on. I hope we find out soon. Speaking of things I want to find out and still haven't forgotten about, I am still curious about the pigeon incident! :p

This was another fantastic chapter - keep up the great work. :)

Author's Response: Hi Kristin! :)

Not at all! I'm just glad you're still reading this story, it makes me so happy to get your lovely thoughts on it. I'm pleased you liked hearing from Richard - it's funny, when I first starting writing this I had no idea I was going to slip into his point of view so frequently, but it's quite fun. Wow, thank you! :) I'm so pleased you think history is being brought to life! :D

Haha yes, more about the potion later! :P And she's definitely here for longer than a few hours this time.

Yes! Rose is going to get into trouble, and she's very differently minded from the people in the past. And she's going to have some difficulty reconciling herself to the treatment of women as well. Richard is quite fascinated by her, so she gets away with it a little, but he has his darker, masochist side too, inevitably. I wouldn't like it either!

Hehe, I promise to tell more about Scorpius (in fact, there's a whole half-a-chapter dedicated to their saga!). And the pigeon incident! Gah, there's never the perfect time to introduce it. I promise not to hold out forever however. :P

Thanks so much for the lovely review! ♥ I just put the next chapter into the queue - this story is just so fun to write and update. :)

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