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Review:800 words of heaven says:
REVIEW TAG!

I'm glad I'm back way quicker than I was last time. I missed poor Viktor and his socially awkward ways!

I think my favourite part of this chapter was all your descriptions of the settings. I loved how you took the time to describe The Leaky Cauldron and why it had changed. You, like Viktor thought, didn't have to do that, but you did anyway to show that times had changed and people had moved on. I also loved the little addition of the security check - times have definitely moved on, but it remains to be seen if all this extra caution is good or bad.

It's nice to know that some things never change, like Diagon Alley. And the press. Always after a sensational story! I really sympathised with Vikotr there. He just wants to get away from it all and nurse his broken heart in peace. Is that really too much to ask?

And our main leads have met already! And it's only the third chapter! Yayayay! I'm now really excited to see how you develop their relationship, because you've set it up as a blossoming friendship borne out of mutual benefit, and I can tell that it's going to be a long and winding road ahead for these two! Woohoo!

I completely get that need to mark a WIP "complete". I've never done it myself, but I can imagine it's a good feeling! Good luck with that endeavour, and I hope to be back soon :)

Author's Response: Hi! It was nice to see you back! :D

I'm so glad you liked the descriptions of Diagon Alley! I was a bit afraid that they might seem unnecessary to readers, but I think it's natural that Viktor is comparing what he saw years ago to what he sees now and it was an easy way to show how time has changed. :)

The press will definitely never change! It's still the same in their and out here in our world too. ;) And Viktor has to face the press again!

Yup, our main leads have met! :D I know it's too quick, but the real story begins from now and I thought this much background was enough. Their relationship takes really long time to develope, you see, for both of them like someone else, but the slower the better in love!

I've never marked a WIP completed too! And I truly mean to do that with this story. Thank you so so much for the wishes! Hope to see you back soon!

And yeah, thanks for this amazing review too!

Ashwini


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