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Review:marauderfan says:
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I love the first few paragraphs of this. Love it. So much. The descriptions of how she's adapting to her new "friendship" with him are lovely, you absolutely paint a picture of feelings with your words (Uh, that made more sense in my head). Helga is so confused and flustered, and I bet it's clear as day to Salazar, who it seems is kind enough to not point it out :p

I loved the scene with all of them considering how to defeat boggarts. Salazar was quite a moody jerk after Godric shared his happy news, but I loved the conversation between Helga and Salazar soo much. Seriously because of your fic I'm 100% a Helgazar shipper. (Which makes it difficult to keep writing my own Founders fic now, haha. )

Rowena is really sweet at the end, and I enjoyed seeing the two of them have some time for girl chat together. Man, she is in a tough place. I don't envy her.

I've probably mentioned this before but your dialogue really is fantastic. I struggle with writing Founders era dialogue and in this fic it just seems so effortless, it's really great.

Yay! Amazing chapter!

Author's Response: UGH KRISTIN. Why am I so awful? Why am I just now responding to this? *hangs head in shame* You are so sweet to keep coming by and reviewing every once in a while, and I love hearing from you!

ANYWAY. Response time! :)

I think I really like to have big chunks of description in my stories, and I'm always concerned that they will drag. And this one was particularly tough, I remember, because I needed to gloss over several weeks of time in a couple of paragraphs. It took me forever to get it anywhere near what I wanted! But I'm really glad that the feelings came through :) And you seem to have a perfect read on both Helga and Salazar, which makes me really happy!

Haha, they say once you go Helgazar, you never go back! (They don't actually say that. I don't even know who "they" is, really :P). But in all seriousness, that conversation is one of several turning points they've had, and it was great to have them begin to understand each other. I loved writing it! It was a lot of fun working with all the characters at this point in the story, because they're all getting to that point where they are comfortable letting their guards down a bit. Helga and Rowena's conversation at the end is my favorite part :)

Thanks again for coming by, and for your encouragement! I'll definitely have to check out your Founders fic again very soon and get caught up :) You're wonderful, Kristin!

--Maggie


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