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Review:annaconda88 says:
Hmmm again the details... The story has great potential and I think your writing style is good and also funny but I think the small details make all the difference..
I'm a bit disappointed in the way you described ron's and harry's reaction in the previous chapter ... That he just says: "are u together now"... Really thats a bit far fetched since they hated dracos guts for like ages... Its funny that nothing happens when they find out that their best friends is datin him? Again its too fast, u know what i mean?
U also skipped a lot of time now which is a bit of a shame. I would have wanted to read about other peoples first reactions to their relationship and of course the pregnancy..
And hmm minor details... I thought draco doesnt have friends anymore (just an example, its a bit conflicting sometimes..)
Dont want to be rude, I like ur story but I just have the feeling u leave out stuff u have well elaborated in ur head and twist details/ info around.. ;) take care!

Author's Response: That was just the first run in! Harry and ron will have more to say about the matter, don't worry! And yes, more details will be added!

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