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Review:academica says:
Hi Branwen! Here for the Ravenclaw Review Battle :)

This was a cute story. I decided to come check it out because it seemed a tad bit under-loved. I thought your characterization was great and not too over-the-top as Next Gens often are. I also enjoyed the light, brisk pace of this first chapter as Victoire and her friends try to figure out the full depth of what Fred is up to and how to get back at him properly.

The conversation between Lexy and the Ravenclaws was amusing. My first thought, too, was, "Well, that's not so bad, is it? Out of all the pranks he could have pulled?" Especially compared to a dungbomb. Anyway, I liked how the Ravenclaws rallied to their own defense and the two Houses were able to unite in getting back at Fred.

Hopefully you can continue this soon. It would be interesting to see what the next chapters bring!

-Amanda

P.S. Good to have you back around! I've missed you!

Author's Response: Thank you! *hugs* School was exhausting this year, but I'm glad to be back!

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