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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi Maggie! :)

Aw, this was just so adorable! You write fluff really well. :) One of the things I really liked about this story was Lily's clear adoration of James. It's constantly there - when she's looking at him, when she's thinking about him - even when he's doing something silly she can't help but think that he's adorable. I especially liked the line where she admits he's a fox! Also, Lily is so clever, noticing that there is something up with the butterbeer and seeing Remus' arm. You did a good job of putting her in canon with how perceptive she is.

James being so awkward and nervous here was so funny as well. I really liked the cameo with the snitch, and how he honestly just seemed so miserable and nervous! The Marauders getting involved in one another's love lives and spying seemed so approapriate, in fact they felt very canon as well, especially with Sirius cat-calling when Lily and James kissed.

The ending to this was so adorable, and I liked how Lily asked him if he really thought she'd say no! :P She knows him so well, and you really got that fun feeling of love across.

This was a wonderful read, well done! :D

Gry/Sly Blackout - 2/7

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