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Review:Vania says:
Yes, yes, yes, and YES! A hundred times yes! Please make the sequel. It just wouldn't seem right to leave it like this, you know? With everything going on in Vida's life, there's so many questions left to be answered. Like, what will happen in 7th year? How will her dad react to Al? What about the plan to reveal bending to the wizarding world? Will Vida actually shave her hair? How about her being a master in Republic City? All that stuff.

I'm also hoping that Vida and Al will stay together. I mean after all the trouble they've gotten into just to admit their feelings for each other, I can't imaging how long it'll take for them to make up after having a falling out in their relationship.

There were a couple of grammatical errors and they've been bugging me. But overall, it's been a great story, very original and I like how you managed to combine both worlds into one epic dimension. It isn't easy with all the details bundled up into one, and yet you did it quite effortlessly. Kudos to you for that!

And since you already have a couple of plans for the hypothetical sequel, I just wanted to put it out there that I really think you could make an entire series if you wanted to; the story certainly has potential :) Good luck!

Author's Response: Thank you for your advice; I don't have a beta so its really easy to miss those errors, but I'll go back and correct them eventually! I've thought about all these questions you have asked, and I'm pretty sure they'll all be answered :) I never thought of a whole series; though I do love the characters and whole mix of the dimensions- I'll certainly consider it! Thank you again!

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