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Review:lady_devil says:
For the Blackout Bingo!

Hi! I just want to say this is just a great start to your story; you set the scene perfectly well.

This chapter was very entertaining, like watching an episode from a show and seeing teenagers behaving like normal teenagers. What you wrote was a perfect length for the first chapter. Sets the story going and the ending made me want to read the second chapter straight away! I hope you keep writing! I have already favourite it.

I've always liked next gen characters and the way you made James and Lily, loveable characters at first go! Love their little banter over James admiring himself in the mirror. The comment about Lockhart was funny! I defiantly liked the idea of Harry telling funny stories about Lockhart to his children.

Your OC Annabelle, I love her! I really do, even her name is adorable. She's just so down to earth to me - being forgiving and agreeing to go on the double date for Lily and writing to her father is just so sweet, can't wait to read more about her.

Hope you update with a new chapter soon!

Author's Response: hey!

thank you for this review, it really made me smile :) I'm so glad you like this story so far and I really hope you stick around!

I'm sure I'll be posting soon, so I hope to see you back :)

thanks again!


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