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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle 14/15

This was very sweet and tugged right at my heartstrings.
I loved your depiction of James and Lily. You really showed the beauty of their relationship here.
The use of the poem was just breathtaking. It fit in very well with the theme of the story.
The descriptions were very well written and made every bit so vivid.
The only CC I'd give you is to perhaps add in some scenes with dialogue to make us connect to James and Lily more. That would have made this even better.
Otherwise, good job =)

-AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hello!
I'm glad you liked it! I wrote this rather early on, before I really got into James/Lily or the Marauder era- hopefully whenever I get back to editing my old stories, I'll be able to add a bit more to this :) Thanks for reviewing and the CC!

~Sara


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