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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle 13/15

Haha this was awesome. I enjoyed your portrayal of McGonagall immensely. I think this was very much in line with her canon self.
I also found it amusing that Dumbledore and Dobby were making taffy in the kitchen. Imagining the sight of the two of them in matching aprons was absolutely hilarious.
When the taffy exploded, I almost laughed out loud. Poor McGonagall. I also found the last sentence very amusing that she was finally planning to take a sick leave.
Honestly, I could actually see this happening in canon too - Dumbledore is just that eccentric and with Dobby at his side, I could just imagine the havoc, with poor Minerva having to deal with it all. The condition of the other house elves was awesome too, they just knew nothing good could come out of this and the two would destroy their poor kitchen haha.

Great job!
-AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey! I'm only, you know, almost 6 months late responding. I've decided that I am incapable of doing this in a timely manner. So sorry!

I'm really glad you liked this little fic, though. It was fun to write and I enjoyed having a chance to use McGonagall in an unexpected way. It's comforting to know that you felt she was pretty canon! She can be a hard one to write!

When I started this, I knew everyone would expect me to use the twins, and I really wanted to throw that expectation off. When it hit me to use Dumbledore and Dobby instead I knew it was perfect. I'm really glad you enjoyed the duo as well. And you know them...there HAD to be matching aprons if they were involved.

Thanks so much for reading and I'm honored that you enjoyed it enough to laugh out loud. This review was so much fun to get back in March, and a treat to re-read now as I replied to it. Thanks again!
- Farmgirl


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