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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle 12/15

I think this was a very interesting insight into what Ginny went through when she first came across Tom's diary.
Her characterisation of an eleven-year-old girl worrying about what her crush thinks of her was also pretty much spot on.
Her curiosity and naivety (if it can be called that) was also quite believable and a part of me could connect with her.
The descriptions and flow was very good as well as I could visualise the events happening. The writing style itself was engaging.

All in all, I think you did a pretty job with this, contrary to what you think. I quite enjoyed it and felt it did justice to the "missing moment" given to you in the challenge.

-AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Yeah, it is interesting to dwell in areas of the HP series were it wasn't really ventured. :) I'm glad I got her down! :^D It was weird trying to think like a little girl - when I am pass that stage. :^)


Thanks so much! I'm glad that you think so! ^_^ Thanks for reading and leaving a review!!!




- Asphodel


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