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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle 10/15

Wow, this made for a very chilling read. I loved the darkness that surrounded the piece.
At first I thought the red-head was Lily and then it turned out to be Charity. It was a brilliant twist right there, and it also made so much sense.
It was all very creepy especially with the raw fear and feel of danger and such.
Snape's characterisation was pretty much spot on too. I could imagine him acting like this in such a situation.
It flowed beautifully and had a very haunting feel that almost gave me shivers, especially since your descriptions were so awesome.

All in all, great job!
-AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi Aditi, thanks for the review!

I loved writing this piece as a whole, so so glad you enjoyed reading it.

Yaay for twists! It was going to originally be Lily but decided to mke it a bit different and become Charity for a bit of a darker, sinister feel.

I'm glad that Snape's characterisation was well and that it flowed great, both things that I was cautious about, so very happy to hear they went well.

Thank you for reviewing!

Grace


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