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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout battle 5/15

Woah. My head is spinning right now. Dobby, sweet lovely saviour Dobby, turned into a murderer? He is ridding the world of wizards? Ghosh.

The plot idea for this was twisted and dark and totally weird and so different and I enjoyed it. It was interesting to see a very different side of Dobby. I think the poor elf went crazy or something with his freedom xP

I liked your characterisation of Lily and Hugo too. Their emotions were realistic and I could feel their horror and fear at what was happening. The ending was surely unexpected. I did not think Dobby would kill both of them. It was really horrifying. To think that Dobby did all that made it all the more haunting, to imagine that elf doing it, ghosh.

Your descriptions were also vivid and over all this flowed smoothly. It was a crazy but engaging read. Good job!!

Cheers,
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing!

I'm glad I made your head spin.I'm not sure how else to respond >_<

It was weird and crazy writing it! I really had to push away the image of sweet awesome Dobby that sits in my brain and focus on making all his adorableness somehow creepy.

Thanks again!

Sam


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