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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle 3/15

I am not a Ron/Hermione shipper but the story summer of this was intriguing and occasionally I like to read stories of couples I'm not comfortable with so I decided to give this a try.

I think this was pretty adorable. Your portrayal of Ron/Hermione's relationship was sweet.
Ron's characterisation was nicely done. It was cute how he had made all the preparations. His nervousness was also spot on.
I loved the inclusion of the "fail safe ways to charm witches" book, it was amusing that Ron still "referred" to it haha.
Your descriptions were also very beautiful over all and I liked it. The ending was especially sweet =)

Great job,
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you very much!

Thank you! I really try to keep the characters as close to canon as possible. :) I still haven't decided if Ron took his copy with him while they were camping or if he'd memorized it by that time.

I've been working on improving my descriptions. *blushes* Thank you!

LEP:)


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