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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle 2/15

This was very interesting! I loved the theme of the dance that was incorporated here, because I am a dance-lover myself.
I think your characterisation of Remus was very well done as well. You really got into his mind and portrayed him just how I'd imagine him to be.
Your descriptions were absolutely spellbinding. There were metaphors and imagery and just so much feeling throughout. I was really engaged while reading.
I think the best part of this oneshot was the death scene of Remus. It was exceptionally well-written. I also liked how Teddy featured in Remus' thoughts as well. Sometimes, writers only focus on the 'love' of the characters and forget about the family - especially a child - and I am glad you didn't do that. Because Teddy and Tonks should hold the same place in Remus' heart.
Over all, this was very sad and painful and I could connect with Remus very well. I enjoyed reading this a lot, and I especially liked the ending the way they reunited.

Great job!
10/10
Cheers,
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thanks, Aditi! I'm thrilled that you liked the piece! It's an older piece of mine, so I feel a little bit ashamed of it. I'm not sure if ashamed is the right word. Essentially, I know it's not my best work and I do want to revise it, so I'm nervous when people read it. So it's nice to receive a positive review. I really do appreciate it. :)

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