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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle 1/15

Wow, this was just beautiful and it broke my heart into a million pieces and I am trying to glue them back together now but I keep crying xP

I think the way you portrayed George's pain here was quite unique and very beautifully written.
The relationship he shared with Fred was very special - a twin bond after all - and you definitely did justice to the emotion of one being teared away from the other.
Another thing I want to compliment you on is your hold on second person. I have come across so many stories in second person but so many of them get confusing. However, yours made perfect sense and it even made it all the more powerful.
I also loved the ending. It was nice that it ended on somewhat a hopeful note for George with the "closure" he got.
All in all, the oneshot made me cry and it made me give some sad smiles too. It was bittersweet, touching, and just very nicely written, Your descriptions were awesome and I really loved this.

Great job!
10/10
-AD
(AditiDraco95

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