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Review:Maelody says:
This one was possibly even more sad. Not because George dies, but because we get the chance to see him prepare to die, something Fred didn't get. Fred's life was ripped away, and George's time was coming. When Fred II said "At least I'll get to see you every day" and his voice quivered, my heart literally ached. You broke my heart!

That is a HUGE family! I always imagined the Weasley family expanding to great lengths, too, but I don't think I imagined the excessive use of the same names. Some of these people have quite a while to be dead yet, and there's two Rose's and two Roxanne's and I'd imagine Fabian would get confusing after a while, too!

Speaking of Fabian, I loved the little bit you added with him and his boyfriend! I know it's not meant to make a big deal, but I'm going to make one! I think it's so cute that George and the whole family are totally OKAY with the engagement, and are nothing but happy for them. The reason I'm making a big deal of it, is because it shows how much time has passed. How much views have changed, and how long George has been separated from Fred. Too long! :D

The reunion was great! Even getting to see Percy again (which was sad to see he had gone) was sweet! I loved the whole aspect of these two stories, and I think you did such a lovely job with the both of them! :D Congrats on writing two lovely stories, my dear! :D I hope to read more from you soon!

~Mae

Author's Response: Hi again!

I know, George has the feeling of it and like you said he has to prepare more than Fred did. That made me so sad writing that, although if George did haunt the shop they could get more customers.

HUGE! I know, I've been meaning to edit this and add the information in about them as there as so many so it is a tad confusing but I just haven't got around to it. The Weasley's are like rabbits, lol :p It certainly would!

I loved writing Fabian and as George said he shouldn't have favourites but Fabian was his, he's mine too despite having a little part. I thought it was cute about how he says he got engaged the night previously so easy like he had gotten a new job or something. But the Weasley family are happy and supportive, no matter what.

I feel Percy would have over worked himself too much, but their reunion was cute and sad at the same time. Thank you for the lovely reviews!

-Potterfan310
Soph x


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