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Review:Maelody says:
This is positively breathtaking! Not only that, but you write it in a way without saying exactly who we're reading about, but we know just who it is, and who the brother is. AND it feels like we're the ones making these choices. The ones going through all of this, and the ones leaving our brother behind. It's so heartbreaking, and now I feel somewhat bad for leaving my little brother that doesn't exist behind! haha :)

My only real confusion was when the age came up. Regulus is 9 when he is introduced, and Sirius says he remembers something "many years ago (or old or something like that) and he was playing with Regulus on a game of chess. It makes me think Reg must be three or so, if Sirius is ten. Which would be cannon. (I believe because Sirius runs away at sixteen, right?) I always pictured them being in school age with one another, but I don't think that's necessarily cannon. Even so, I'm not out searching for cannon stories, just good ones. And this one is great! :D I still have goosebumps! :)

Don't leave me, Siri.

You tore my heart out! :'( Little Reg, I know it's hard, but everyone will be so proud of the man you become later!

Amazing story, dear! :) I loved it!

~Mae

Author's Response: Consider this comeback Mae, for your story! Seriously, don't even question why I took this long to respond, because I don't have many answers to that except for that I am the laziest person in the world.

I'm unbelievably thrilled that you had goosebumps (not because I'm some sadist who likes causing people to freak out) because that means that I did my job as a writer pretty effectively!

Nice catch on the age gap there; I should have seen that before! Thank you so much for all your feedback hun, it really brightened my day/week/month. Again, I'm so sorry for how long this took :(


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