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Review:TidalDragon says:
Hello again!

So I definitely liked the beginning of this chapter. I thought it flowed really well from the last and you did a good job of portraying the feelings that Dominique was experiencing there, especially her panic in the nightmare/memory and her relief at coming to.

Some of the interactions with family later felt a bit odd for me. For example I know that Fleur would obviously be devastated, but given her strength in handling Bill's condition and all the experience she would have had with it over all those years, it seemed like she would have taken extra care to comfort her and stay by her side and that Bill would certainly have stayed regardless.

I did think it ended well though in terms of Dominique's overarching reaction of pushing everyone away. It will be interesting to see how she fights through to come to terms with her new condition as the story progresses.

Thanks for keeping this story going!

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for continuing to read this. I am pleased you liked the beginning of the chapter as it was something I was pretty anxious about. Her emotions were a little hard to deal with so I'm glad you liked that too.

Well, in my opinion, with Fleur and Bill the situation was a bit different as Bill didn't turn into a full-fledged werewolf and moreover, he was her fiance/husband. But this is her daughter - and Fleur's just had a shock. She'll be stronger further on as she regains composure though =)

Besides, they all know Dominique very well and they know that she wants to be left alone at such a time. Nonetheless, I am glad you liked the ending too.

Thanks!


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