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Review:TidalDragon says:
Hello again!

You seriously have a gift with writing accented characters and their speech patterns! It must take an amazing amount of care to get the writing down and the patterns just right, not to mention the actual French that you included in this chapter!

I like how you are keeping Victoire moving and structuring the chapters around each new place she visits. I think it matches up really well with the wanderlust theme and it keeps the setting fresh as well.

I do wonder about how quickly Victoire seems to be moving on from Teddy. It seems that after two years together, even at their age, she would not have her affections turned so quickly, even after at their age. I was glad she seemed to feel a bit guilty about it, as I thought that made sense, but I do hope she'll keep journeying on for herself and not get too caught up with the opportunities for "exotic" companions hailing from different places she visits during her journey.

Regardless of that aspect, I'm enjoying reading your writing - your descriptions and distinctive characters are great. I don't know how you come up with them so quickly, but long may it continue!

Author's Response: Hello again! :)

Thank you! I'm really pleased to hear that. I think it helps that I studied Fleur's speech a little and also imagined speaking with people whom I've encountered in the past. I quite liked including all the different speech patterns!

I'm glad you like the way each chapter changes to another location as well. It keeps the plot moving, and gives me the chance to reminisce on some of my favourite places in Europe without lingering for too long in any one location.

That's a good point - I think Victoire is very much inspired by my own personality to be honest, but most people don't move on so quickly. Also, because this story is more segmented there is quite a bit of time happening in between each chapter. Yes, she does feel a little bad, which I think makes sense, and Teddy isn't entirely out of her life yet. She's certainly more interested in traveling and adventures than boys, and always will be. :)

I'm glad you like it, thanks so much for the lovely review! :)


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