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Review:TidalDragon says:
Howdy!

I will just jump right in and say that I thought you did a great job weaving in the tidbits about Dominique's character amidst the story of how she got into this situation and the varying emotions that she experiences.

I also really thought that as the danger increased and the atmosphere darkened, it was clever to start using shorter sentences that built up a kind of staccato rhythm leading into the cliffhanger at the end.

One thing that did strike me as a tad odd was that she would forget about the impending full moon given the seemingly intense fear of werewolves that you set her up with toward the end. I thought that set up was interesting and believable, but it also made me think that Dominique was someone who would never forget about the full moon while in the midst of werewolves, especially a pack of them. Perhaps this will be revealed when we learn more about her working style and habits - I'm not sure, but I think it would be helpful.

At any rate, this being my first Next Gen fic, I'm interested to see that it looks to be headed for a darker path than most of its counterparts here on HPFF (judging by the summaries) and that it is focused on a character that seems to get comparatively less love than others in Dominique.

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Hey there! Apologies for such a late response but thanks for reading and reviewing!

I am pleased you liked how I gave in some details about Dom and the descriptions etc.

Dom is a person who is easily distracted, who gets so caught up in her work that even the fear of werewolves shall not come in her way of work so that's why she "forgot" about it. But yes it is sort of revealed later - the hows and the whys etc.

This is definitely not a light story - it has its light moments - but mostly its about Dom dealing with the dark turn her life has taken and its not going to be all rainbows and sunshine. I just can't deal with fluff like that xP

Thank you!


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